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Peacock Lover by =an3czka:iconan3czka:

Categories Digital Art > Paintings & Airbrushing > People > Portraits

©2009 =an3czka
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Artist's Comments

Final version.
Advanced Critique Encouraged since I still need to learn a lot about painting.

Green, because I like it this way! :D
No feathers, because I was told they should be very long and that would disturb the composition.
Ah yesh and it's the first time ever that I drew a bird ^^

I've fixed some things you guys suggested, thank you :hug:
Please compare with a WIP [link]

Reference : [link]

Critiques


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=Pixel-Spotlight Mar 31, 2009, 1:02:13 PM
The texture of the peacock's feathers - especially the head feathers, around the eye.
I also love the way in which you've painted her face, and her expression. Her expression seems so calm and refined - it reflects the beauty and superiority associated with peacocks perfectly.
Infact, the only thing that I don't absolutely love in this picture is the background. I like the texture, but it does detract a little from the overall image. I saw the WIP and was struck with an idea - the peacock's tail feathers would have to be larger than you originally planned them, but you could place them behind her head, possibly blurring them a little?
I think that would look really good. :giggle:

You asked for critique so I'm offering you some - feel free to just disregard it if you don't like it - this piece is fantastic as it is.
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!Borzoj Mar 25, 2009, 11:39:38 AM
Ale super, no to naucz mnie tak
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~roughlandingg Mar 25, 2009, 11:39:51 AM
This is absolutely beautiful. Awesome work! :)
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=an3czka Mar 25, 2009, 11:49:06 AM
Why thank you. I'm still practising :aww:
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=an3czka Mar 25, 2009, 11:49:44 AM
Dzięki :D
Chyba nie byłaby ze mnie dobra nauczycielka :3 Zjadam uczniów na śniadanie.
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!Borzoj Mar 25, 2009, 11:50:50 AM
Tak się składa, że tą odpowiedź znałem zanim odpisałaś
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~Mona607 Mar 25, 2009, 11:52:49 AM
Ładnie wyszło, gratuluję (: Dziwi mnie tylko, że nie zaznaczyłaś odrobinę wyraźniej początku piersi, ale to tylko taki mały, nieważny szczegół ;3
Jeszcze trochę i pojawisz się na pierwszych stronach popularnych xD
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=an3czka Mar 25, 2009, 11:59:44 AM
Dziękuje pięknie :3
A wiesz, że może dokładnej linii nie zaznaczylam ale probowalam trochę, ehhhm uwypuklić :giggle: Ale pewnie zbyt lekko , bo przy pozniejszym rozjasnianiu jakos przestalo to byc widoczne.

Wow, dzięki, ale taki zaszczyt to mnie raczej nigdy nie kopnie :blowkiss:
:iconan3czka:
=an3czka Mar 25, 2009, 12:00:55 PM
Z byciem dobrym nauczycielem?
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